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posted by [personal profile] watervole at 07:19pm on 08/09/2012
That's it entirely. Each new subplot is interesting, but they all slow down the main story.

And sometimes he can take several chapters on a digression where it could realistically have been dealt with in a couple of pages.
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posted by [personal profile] damerell at 02:25pm on 21/09/2012
Particularly because often we get several chapters for someone who is ultimately destined for a futile death.
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